Trying out rap lyrics!



I, for one, get pretty amazed at rappers who take the time to create textual masterpieces! Eminem being the first to come to mind. This is a little something I put together several years ago and found again recently. Definitely unfinished and I don't even have a name for it yet, but that will come... eventually

As always, comment with thoughts and critiques!

"
I've been thinking like this pen and paper's my only companion
But oh wait, has it been?
I choose to refuse to open up to those closest to home
I say they've failed me before
Oh yeah, well who hasn't?
We're all in the same place, we're all social hazards
I do it to you, you do it to me, but after all you've always cared
So I guess I've just too blind to see
I've been living selfishly with this notebook all to myself
Grieving alone like I don't want to hurt no more, I push you out
This self-pity glues me down
I can't get out, and I keep writing these songs like they'll set me free
Oh, but could it be
That the more I listen to the sound of the words of my mouth run out
The more I'm trapped in their sound
The more self-focus abounds
So if I were to listen to the music from the hearts of others
Tell me could I recover?
If I choose to reuse my experience and learn from the hurt
Maybe others would start doing the same but even if they don't
We're still in the same boat
We've all been used or abused, chewed out or called the issue
So I'll skip the tissue
I've been reliving for too long; self-evaluating in every song
I can acknowledge the problem without substituting words for people
Graphite making me feeble
We're all a bunch of hypocrites lying and evil, needing love
Thank God love is enough
My past is pathetic, I regret it, but look where I'm headed
I turn my eyes ahead and off of my scars and myself
Because my card has been dealt
My old self is already in hell but the new me is homeward bound
I lay me in the ground every morning and yet I live
Not all strength is within
Reflection is essential for grown but not a place to live
"

As always, this is the property of Michaela J, please share with my name :) Thanks

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